Am I a fallen Angel?

March 6th, 2007

Angel of the Goddess

This is actually a continuation of something I started last night. I made the following lines in class, during Geometry.

This poem, like all my positive poems, was inspired by my light, If you want to know what or who my light is, read all my poems =P .

It is also inspired by a certain Angel. It was the Angel that guarded the Garden of Eden with a Flaming sword. I think his name was Uriel, the angel of fire. I relate this angel to me but I guard a certain emotion, not the garden of Eden

I would certainly live up to what I say in this poem…only if chance allows me to do so, but I seems that chance wont let me....

I am your Angel that carries a flaming blade

As long as this fire burns my love for you shall not fade

This fire is fuelled by the heavens above

It shall never be extinguished this I tell you my love

 

At times when you think you would fall

Threat not for only my name you should call

I shall catch you in my angelic arms

I shall protect you from this world’s harms

 

In the cold, I shall be by your side

I shall warm you with wings that open wide

With my white garments I shall wipe all your tears

I am here, Please forget all your fears

 

If you feel weak, I shall grasp your hand

worry not for I shall help you stand

To see you hurt, my heart shall bleed

I’ll be here in your time of need

 

My love my love I shall defend

through my duty I shall transcend

Come with me and look towards the sky

I won’t let anything come between you and I

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Anonymous (guest)

Comment posted on March 13th, 2008 at 11:58 PM
eyow...yes naman ang ganda ng poem mo

Laiza (guest)

Comment posted on February 7th, 2008 at 11:39 PM
ayy ayoko ung nag comment ng :"> =))))

Anonymous (guest)

Comment posted on February 7th, 2008 at 11:38 PM
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Comment posted on March 21st, 2007 at 07:29 PM
the burning fire is slowly losing it's blaze? as in the love's slowly losing it's spark...the hope in the love...is slowly dying...*whew* u've got a poet's heart u know that...and i just tend to admire poeple like that....ur good...real good and i enjoyed ur poem a lot....^_^
Comment posted on March 21st, 2007 at 10:49 PM
You're the first one who actually tried to analyze my poem...your right about the flame but only a part of it...the flame that I speak of does not only represent hope, it somewhat has a deeper meaning...but hope IS a part of the meaning...

did you ready all my poems?
Comment posted on March 22nd, 2007 at 02:51 PM
oh...well, i do love analyzing poems since there's a kind of mystique on how the poet sees it and how ordinary people understand it...single poem, different interpretations, different levels of imagery, different angles...ain't that beautiful?^_^ i'm a frustrated writer, too (try to scan my blog)and i'm aiming to hear different perspective on one single type of literature...di ba, it feels good when people criticize ur work kahit na negative...kasi ibig sabihin nun, binasa,,,i haven't read all ur poems but i'll try that one time when i'm have all the time in my hands...^_^
Comment posted on March 22nd, 2007 at 10:49 PM
If you really like my poems, there are more to come =P. Sometimes I can post at least one poem a day..."at least"...I can sometimes make 2 or 3 a day if I'm really inspired XD
Comment posted on March 23rd, 2007 at 06:45 PM
a true writer needs an inspiration...tama ba?^_^...i've got two pending short stories to finish...and i'm still waiting for the inspiration to come...^_^
Comment posted on March 22nd, 2007 at 08:44 AM
I ment *read all my poems *
Comment posted on March 7th, 2007 at 07:14 PM
all i can say that your inlove hehehe!!
its nice..
well!!i can fell that its sad,happy,sometimes heartache..hehehe
all i can say that you compost thatpoem?
or you copy paste it?
don't be ofended?

i like this part...
If you feel weak, I shall grasp your hand
worry not for I shall help you stand
To see you hurt, my heart shall bleed
I’ll be here in your time of need
Comment posted on March 7th, 2007 at 07:35 PM
All the poems here In my Tabulas are originals. I made all of them. There's a link there near the top where you can go to the category where all my poems are placed...(the one with "POEMS")

I havn't told the Girl I like how I feel. She's always busy so I dont get to talk to her anymore
Comment posted on March 8th, 2007 at 06:29 PM
OK!!i know it.so nice poem...ok!!!

hahahha!!so she is your friend?or your classmate?
Comment posted on March 8th, 2007 at 06:39 PM
She's a friend of mine...she cant be my classmate. I study in an exclusive boys school. I am a green-blooded Archer who happend to walk through the Eagle's nest ^_^
Comment posted on March 9th, 2007 at 09:48 AM
well!!there's one time that you would fall to your friends.we have desame situations..unfortunately, he didn't even know that i like him more than a friends..hehehe!!anyway,im a fraid to loss him.even he is my friend..hehehe!!!

well!!nice school exclusive for boys..i like that...

Andre' (guest)

Comment posted on March 9th, 2007 at 09:39 PM
Oohh....dude, tlagang deeply in-love ka sa girl. Your too desperate for that girl that you are willing to sacrifice your life for your love, even though, let's say she hasn't answered you yet - you know what I mean ;D
Comment posted on March 10th, 2007 at 08:28 PM
no!!im a girl..k!!not so but i will sacrifice my love if it is must..
but i will try to 4 get him
Comment posted on March 11th, 2007 at 07:50 AM
I think Andre' was refering to me ^_^

Jero (guest)

Comment posted on March 7th, 2007 at 08:42 AM
Actually, though it was a cherubim (an angel usually depicted with a flaming sword; a "soldier" angel) who was guarding the gates of the Garden of Eden, there was no proof that it was indeed Uriel who was the said angel. One author says that the angel was actually Aziphrale (who can now be found selling ancient books in an obscure bookshop somewhere in Great Britain)... :P
Comment posted on March 7th, 2007 at 06:53 PM
Ok...that was the word I was searching for..."cherubim" The type of angel I was trying to show was a "soldier" Angel. It somewhat relates to me in a way.
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